i calculated ur odds with a graphing calculator to do the math for me and ur odds look JUST about right. give or take the size of ur decimals. like i think the one for 12 outs knowin 24 cards is a little under 45% but ur close enough to be effective.
good job! lol i couldnt have thought all that up myself like u did. we got a Gus H. in the house lol.

calculatin like that aint easy 2 do.